30.1 Terma
in a rock or a crystalherb or a treein a lake or the skywhy not me?I could live an eternity where love couldn’t name a thing, or with the Japanese Heart Nut tree, Sweet Gum or a Honey Locust.And never...
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A, I really didn't read this as a children's poem. not to say that it might not be. i love the naming of the trees and i prefer the first last stanza. where is the first stanza from?
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I like the first last S too (except, why is it "when one" instead of "the one"? perhaps I'm reading it wrong.) Also: of what it cost to keep the world in sardines, apples and kelp.
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thanksthe first S is mine. At first it was the whole poem. love that pic, Mignon
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Another 30? Be ye mad, woman? I'm goofing off now that my feature poems are mostly chosen. I'm too to plan anything thi smonth, but I'll pop in in March for 7 if anyone's game. Hope for some Women's...
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Yes, those trees are gorgeous. I like the whole poem, and don't think it's for children at all. I also liked the sardines/apples stanza. Personally I kind of liked the second alternative, but...
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Oh! Re-start set #30. I'm slow sometimes. Yay to you for reaching the big 3-0!!! I'll be around if anyone posts, but I couldn't write a poem this week if my life depended on it.
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